Thursday, 11 April 2013

Before Sunrise Movie - Jess


  1. Jess, you add clauses to your sentence - extra pieces of information... as the clouds move slowly.....After many hours walking...

    I love the way you have used speech to drive the story on ... and even worked very hard to put the speech marks in correctly...“Why, Why? I thought you were the one!” runs along then stares pipe and stairs at the window.

  2. To Jess,
    We think it is AWESOME!!!! We like the way you had a clear voice and you also had good describing words.

    From Lucy and Chloe


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