At school there was a test and I thought it would be boring, until my brother announced that you could win a trip to the moon. I was so excited that I got all the answers right.
The next day I went to the moon with my dad. But when I got there it had melted and we slid into slippery gooey middle. Dad called mum but she did not reply.
We were stuck in the middle of the moon for two months until we dug ourselves out. Next we built a space shuttle to get home.
Josephine
Josephine I love the way you add extra pieces on your sentences (clauses) to make them interesting. ... I was so excited that I got all the answers right.
ReplyDeleteYou also worked very hard to take out the unimportant words so you could reach the 100 word total.