The Market
Tall
buildings gather around the market. They
have window eyes watching and bunting dancing for joy in the breeze.
The
sound of happy chatter surrounds me as the
bells chime from the church tower.
Teasing
arms surround me and my mouth waters as I smell sharp cheese hot bacon butties
cooking.
I'd like to eat one!
From
Arohaina
Great work Arohaina on getting your market description finished and onto the class blog. I like the way you have talked about the buildings as if they are alive. This is called 'personification' as you have made them sound like a person: Tall buildings gather around the market. They have window eyes watching and bunting dancing for joy in the breeze.
ReplyDeleteIt is also great that you have used personification again to describe what the bunting is doing: bunting dancing for joy in the breeze.
Challenge:
What do you mean by teasing arms?
Teasing arms surround me and my mouth waters as I smell sharp cheese hot bacon butties cooking.