One day my mum took me to the market. I walked around the market to find a bacon butte . The man with mum was slicing some cheese for us to sample. I had $5 to spend so I bought a bacon butte. The sauce exploded all over my face.
Sammy, great work on your first 5 Sentence Challenge. I love the way you have used connectives to help add more details to your sentence like to, for, so...
Challenge: Could you use a simile to describe the exploding sauce? The sauce exploded all over my face like a sweet river moving down a hill.
Oh goodness Sammy! What a disaster but hopefully the sauce was delicious. You made me hungry writing about bacon butties!
ReplyDeleteSammy, great work on your first 5 Sentence Challenge. I love the way you have used connectives to help add more details to your sentence like to, for, so...
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Could you use a simile to describe the exploding sauce?
The sauce exploded all over my face like a sweet river moving down a hill.