Tuesday, 10 June 2014

5 Sentence Challenge #17 - Sammy

One day my mum took me to the market. I walked around the market to find a bacon butte . The man with mum was slicing some cheese for us to sample. I had $5 to spend so I bought a bacon butte. The  sauce exploded all over my face. 


  1. Mrs Skinner (Team 100)14 June 2014 at 08:25

    Oh goodness Sammy! What a disaster but hopefully the sauce was delicious. You made me hungry writing about bacon butties!

  2. Sammy, great work on your first 5 Sentence Challenge. I love the way you have used connectives to help add more details to your sentence like to, for, so...

    Could you use a simile to describe the exploding sauce?
    The sauce exploded all over my face like a sweet river moving down a hill.


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