Thursday, 12 June 2014

5 Sentence Challenge #17 - Kaylee

“Yum” the sweet smell of strawberry jam fills my nose. In the distance above all the hustle and bustle I could hear the church bell ringing. The colourful bunting were waying gracefully in the breeze. All of the children were running to get lots of yummy sweets. I just knew that it would be really fun.

1 comment:

  1. Mrs Skinner (Team 100)17 June 2014 at 08:41

    This writing shows me Kaylee that you are ready to have a go at 100WC! Your story is very descriptive with lots of imaginative vocabulary. Well done!


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