Thursday, 12 June 2014

5 Sentence Challenge #17 - Aria

Ding, dong went the old rusty bell tower.
When I saw two beautiful bunting that looked like dinosaur teeth above a tall building!
The market was filled with lot of people. All around was people rushing to get the jam before it went out. There was lots of delicious sharp cheese.


  1. Mrs Skinner (Team 100)17 June 2014 at 09:19

    Well done Aria! These are super sentences. You could make them even better if you read them through them to tweak some of the words. Thank you for writing for 5sc!

  2. Hello Aria
    Well done for your 5SC entry! I liked how you described the bunting as looking like dinosaur teeth. I've never thought of that before but now you've mentioned it, I can see that it does!
    Mrs Ower (Team 5SC)
    Costa del Sol, Spain


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