tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post8072152409164407465..comments2023-03-25T23:13:13.610+13:00Comments on Springston Waka Endeavour: 5 Sentence Challenge #17 - ArohainaUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-69916488538703618112014-06-16T21:38:01.387+12:002014-06-16T21:38:01.387+12:00Great work Arohaina on getting your market descrip...Great work Arohaina on getting your market description finished and onto the class blog. I like the way you have talked about the buildings as if they are alive. This is called 'personification' as you have made them sound like a person: Tall buildings gather around the market. They have window eyes watching and bunting dancing for joy in the breeze.<br />It is also great that you have used personification again to describe what the bunting is doing: bunting dancing for joy in the breeze.<br /><br />Challenge:<br />What do you mean by teasing arms?<br />Teasing arms surround me and my mouth waters as I smell sharp cheese hot bacon butties cooking.Allana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.com