Saturday, 21 June 2014

Constructive Comments from students

Take a look at the comments you are making on the writing of others.  Are they constructive comments?

Hi Phoebe, You could go back and reread your comment and correct the mistakes in your comment. 

Submitted on June 19, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Hey Ryan 
Thats is Wicked! The emerald staff will really help you when you face ender dragon. Why do you like the Hunger games?

Hi Alfonso I like the way you put the story together. Maby you could of had your own piture. How do you enchant. 
By Jack B – 9 years old.

what a good post Jack. 
love the way you said like a thunder storm to describe the cat. 
I think you need to add more detail to your story.


I do like your post Aria, but one of your sentences do not make sense. 
You should go back and reread your story to see if it makes sense.


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