Hi Phoebe, You could go back and reread your comment and correct the mistakes in your comment.
Submitted on June 19, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Thats is Wicked! The emerald staff will really help you when you face ender dragon. Why do you like the Hunger games?
Submitted on June 17, 2014 at 11:57 AM
Hi Alfonso I like the way you put the story together. Maby you could of had your own piture. How do you enchant.
By Jack B – 9 years old.
Submitted on June 17, 2014 at 11:54 AMWOW
what a good post Jack.
love the way you said like a thunder storm to describe the cat.
I think you need to add more detail to your story.
Submitted on June 17, 2014 at 11:47 AMI do like your post Aria, but one of your sentences do not make sense.
You should go back and reread your story to see if it makes sense.