Thursday, 12 June 2014

5 Sentence Challenge #17 - Estelle

The bell tower chimes above the ground high in the sky with the bright sun revealing its dull brown colour.

Bunting hangs high above the ground looking like dinosaur teeth.

The people gather around the stalls, crowding the poor market sellers.

The cheerful colour of the shops brings everything to life.


All the different colours of cheese light the corner of my eye.  By Estelle - 8 years old

1 comment:

  1. These are wonderful sentences Estelle! You have painted a fantastic picture for your readers with dome much colour and energy. I do think you should look at 100wc and have a go!

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