Thursday, 12 June 2014

5 Minute Challenge: Alfonso

The big tall buildings were surrounding the people. They were selling lots of food for people to eat.  There  were kids with their parents and lots of people in the fish and chip shop.
Beside the village shop, right behind the big green tree ,was a big clock  tower looking over the crowd. The colourful bunting was hanging from the buildings and looked like dinosour teeth.  By Alfonso - 9 years old

1 comment:

  1. Also so - these are fantastic sentences! You have placed all the things you have chosen to write about so your readers know exactly where they are. Well done!


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