Sunday, 15 July 2012

Quick Write - Lightning Strike

We are looking at how Cornelia starts her book 'When Santa Fell to Earth' by describing a thunder storm.  Most of us have experienced one, but here is another example to help us with our Quick Write description.  We might want to use these descriptions when we write our own myth.  


  1. Lightning explodes to the ground lightning also snaps tree branches


  2. Well done Ripora....
    Lightning explodes and lightning snaps.

    These are great examples of activating nouns. I think you have really succeeded on your learning target for Monday. Super work!

  3. I love the loud sound and the cracking that it makes.

    Chloe age eight


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