Friday, 4 May 2012

Pirate Story

Jeremy has been writing a story about Captain S and his terrible attack by the pirates.  I like the words he has used like 'ready for action' and that he thought the weapons sounded like music.  It really painted a picture in my mind.

Tell him what you think of his story in a comment.

1 comment:

  1. Mummy and Cameron7 May 2012 at 07:47

    We love your story and can't wait to hear what happens next, after the battle!


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