Gathering the ideas:
What happens before, during and after this image?
What is the setting?
Where does it take place?
Who are the characters?
What do they look like?
How do they move or speak?
What are their habits.
How do they feel?
What is the problem?
How does it get worse?
How do you solve the problem?
Technical:
Where are you paragraphs?
Have you used magical words?
Have you used different punctuation.
Is there some speech in your story?
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