Thursday 11 November 2010

Strong Peppermint Simile Poem


A hot peppermint look as white as a glass pearl
It smells like a cool breeze of fresh toothpaste
It feels like a cold fire freezing my throat
Is taste as minty and strong as perfume
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5 comments:

  1. Anton16 November 2010 at 13:29

    Great poem Kes. I loved the way you put the similes together. You should've come to the Young Writers with a poem like this!

    From Anton The E-Team

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  2. Anonymous19 November 2010 at 10:12

    Wow Kes, that really paints a picture in my mind, keep up the good work!

    From Ciara E-Team

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  3. Izaac19 November 2010 at 10:19

    Awesome poem. I like the way you used different types of similes, not just about cold stuff.

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    Izaac Yr 6 The E-Team

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  4. Josh23 November 2010 at 10:14

    I love the way you put the way it smells it feels and it tastes.


    from Josh the E-Team

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  5. Anonymous3 December 2010 at 10:29

    Jake & Jayden: Thats a real cool poem you should do some more.

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