Nice poem Jake! It is a funny yet convincing poem. I could literally taste them in my mouth!
A great comment Freddie. Which success criteria has he achieved? Look at the WALT sheet with the success criteria at the bottom or your writing sample sheet.
I like how you used different words in your poem and expressed them differently.Josh the E-team
Wow nice poem Jake. You really described the sour worm and its taste. I don't think I want to eat one. William the E-team.
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