10 Minute Challenge - Escaping Cat

The twisted vicious cat squashed himself in the door. His pitiful meow filled the room as he tried to push through. You could hear him scratching and growling. His contorted face made it look it look like he had a caramel chocolate swirls like ice cream and he was melting slowly. 

He was trapped. 

His white long whiskers were twitching in the sunlight. His face was going to turn into a pancake if he stayed like that all night. He forced the door to open. It was really funny sitting there watching him. 

By Maya

Year 5

10 min challenge - escaping cat

The cats head is getting squished like a pancake. He is trying to get the cat food or trying to get outside.   

The cat is growling at the door as he is forcing the door open.

He has bulging eyes. The cat is trapped.

The cat’s whiskers are twitching.

The cat is twisting its way through.

PATRICK

Tigger tries to escape

The repeated scratching and deep growling reverberated around the room and made me look up.

Tigger, our inquisitive cat had wedged herself in the small gap by the door.  Her chocolate caramel swirl fur looked like melting ice-cream seeping through the gap.  White whiskers trembles and twitched as her paw repeatedly swiped at the door. 

Tigger’s face was contorted as she kept pushing through the gap and her teeth looked like vicious needles ready to bite.

I sat there smiling at the sight and wondered if I should help her get through.

Allana

Escaping cat

The cat is squashed like a pancake as it tried to push through the door. It is growling like a trapped tiger. The cat has vicious teeth. It looks like it is forcing the door to shut. The whiskers are poking out very stiffly. His head is twisted around. It is like the cat is getting tortured. It is scratching the door very hard.

Lake Brunner

4 

On Friday I went to l Lake Brunner with my extended family. We stayed at an above ground house with a sleep out out back. My cousins and I stayed in the sleep-out with a pool table, ping-pong table and a bathroom. My uncle Tony owns a batch three houses down. He also owns a pontoon boat down by the yacht club. When my cousins and I  go down we put 50c on the train tracks and when we go back a train should have gone over them. 

Tate

7/4/14

Water skiing at Lake Hood

In the weekend my family and I went to Lake Hood to do some water skiing.  We went with Dad’s mates who took their jet boats as well. One of Dad’s mates had a V8 motor in it but we had to fix it because it stalled in the middle of the lake. 

Dad and I had to go help him. I guess he had run out of gas.

Dad’s other mate had a very small boat but it was still good for water skiing and going in the donut.  

When I went in the donut, we went over some big bumps and I came off.   When dad went for a ski he only went on one ski first. Then it started to pour down with rain so we got the boat on the trailer and went home. 

Jack S 

Terrible Storm

Pop bang what a storm. We were all having our netball trials when the sky started to rumble and grumble.

Flash, crack, sizzle the lightning strikes.

Huge drops of rain started to fall then wham hail the size of golf balls rushed down from the sky.

So we all ran as fast as we could to get inside where we could watch the spectacular show mother nature was putting on.

By Taylah

10 Minute Writing - Vicious monster

Ooh hi there. I’m in trouble. I forgot that I could not go though the small space. 
Ooh help I’m trapped in the vicious animal's mouth. I’m not a caramel chocolate ice cream swirl. STOP YOU VICIOUS MOSTER. STOP.
I don’t like it so stop please.   It is killing me.  
I’ll never get out of here. 
Ooh yay I’m out I’m out. 
Bang!  Oh, you're only a door!

Her face was all squashed up like a ball. She was forcing her face.  She was growling like a baby. Libby

10 Minute Challenge - escaping cat

The cats head is getting squished like a pancake. He is trying to get the cat food or trying to get outside.   

The cat is growling at the door as he is forcing the door open.

He has bulging eyes. The cat is trapped.

The cat’s whiskers are twitching.

The cat is twisting its way through.

PATRICK

Escaping cat - 10 min challenge

I was coming home and I saw my cat stuck. We crack up laughing as his head was twisted with force into the gap. He had his teeth and his tongue out. He was growling and howling like a thunder storm. He tried really hard to get through. He is probably going to be vicious but he is a funny cat.

By Jack B

Escaping cat - 10 minute challenge

The twisted vicious cat squashed himself in the door. His pitiful meow filled the room as he tried to push through the doors. You could hear him scratching and growling. His contorted face made it look it look like he had a caramel chocolate swirls like ice cream and he was melting slowly. 

He was trapped. 

His white long whiskers were twitching in the sunlight. His face was going to turn into a pancake if he stayed like that all night. He forced the door to open. It was really funny sitting there watching him. 

Maya