tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.comments2023-03-25T23:13:13.610+13:00Springston Waka EndeavourUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1145125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-63837584886901886302014-09-21T11:38:01.248+12:002014-09-21T11:38:01.248+12:00Brilliant work Alfonso - you were the only person ...Brilliant work Alfonso - you were the only person in the 'Boys Box' to get your writing finished and up on the Five Sentence Challenge.<br /><br />I really like the way you have used extra pieces of a sentence (clause) to begin: In the distance, Beside a small building. This helps me know where things are happening and just give me lots more detail.<br /><br />Challenge:<br />Use your 'Writer's Eyes' when you edit. Read it out loud because I can see some sentences without capitals and some of them sound a bit odd. You ears will tell you which tiny bits need fixing.<br /><br />Keep up your great writing Alfonso.Allana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-38607549362797457752014-09-08T00:12:59.360+12:002014-09-08T00:12:59.360+12:00HI Rosie, I loved your amazing descriptive writing...HI Rosie, I loved your amazing descriptive writing... I especially enjoyed the simile "the puppies are circling me like a pack of dolphins around a boat"... fabulous work! Keep reading and keep writing! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15286381365724266499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-57464472193944100602014-08-28T09:59:39.309+12:002014-08-28T09:59:39.309+12:00Hi Ryan
Wow what is your bunny's name?
From M...Hi Ryan <br />Wow what is your bunny's name?<br />From MayaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-81021898597559935202014-08-21T10:14:35.878+12:002014-08-21T10:14:35.878+12:00this is a cool video
challange;
make it go into t...this is a cool video<br />challange;<br /><br />make it go into the haka strate away next time.<br />how long did it take.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-15062933795384602842014-08-21T10:08:37.361+12:002014-08-21T10:08:37.361+12:00i love this videoi love this videoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-21260947141722365092014-08-21T10:07:47.162+12:002014-08-21T10:07:47.162+12:00this is a cool video.
this is a cool video.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-17895515593406127852014-08-16T19:09:35.262+12:002014-08-16T19:09:35.262+12:00How could we make something similar without 's...How could we make something similar without 'stealing' Pharrell William's song?Allana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-65236221250687926472014-08-14T14:59:03.145+12:002014-08-14T14:59:03.145+12:00Hi!
We love that song too. We love that song so mu...Hi!<br />We love that song too. We love that song so much we made a movie about it and all the things we love at school. Here is the link to have a look at it - <br />http://annaslearners.blogspot.co.nz/2014/04/turangawaewae.html<br /><br />From Room 5<br />Hamilton East SchoolHam Easthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16943847255594385129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-45208423501962663712014-08-05T13:15:50.022+12:002014-08-05T13:15:50.022+12:00Hi Allana
Wow that video is cool can you post mor...Hi Allana <br />Wow that video is cool can you post more cool things like that.<br />From Harriet Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-52524634401460845502014-08-04T09:18:43.132+12:002014-08-04T09:18:43.132+12:00Wow sarah sixty books is a lot of books in six mon...Wow sarah sixty books is a lot of books in six months<br /><br />Isaac cAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-32391145761403992822014-08-02T16:22:46.668+12:002014-08-02T16:22:46.668+12:00WOW, that is amazing!!!WOW, that is amazing!!!Oliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16139687413589851649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-70293232078838133192014-07-31T09:07:09.872+12:002014-07-31T09:07:09.872+12:00That is a lot of books, we don't think we have...That is a lot of books, we don't think we have read that many.<br />From USB Lincoln PrimaryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-81590302509101105772014-07-28T10:18:57.381+12:002014-07-28T10:18:57.381+12:00Wow that's so cool Liam I wish I was like you ...Wow that's so cool Liam I wish I was like you that sounds so fun!<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-76840598645343456862014-07-25T11:16:11.659+12:002014-07-25T11:16:11.659+12:00Kowhai Room 3 at Weedons did these names last year...Kowhai Room 3 at Weedons did these names last year! They were great fun! I'm looking forward to seeing what your symmetry names look like. You can see the Kowhai pictures here: http://weedonskowhai.blogspot.co.nz/2013/07/name-symmetry-art.html<br /><br />From,<br />Miss LyallMiss Lyallhttp://twentytwentylearning.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-31375116975321513042014-07-08T19:02:17.348+12:002014-07-08T19:02:17.348+12:00Nice work on the hokey pokey, Team Endeavour. I w...Nice work on the hokey pokey, Team Endeavour. I wonder if you can make some to sell at the next school fair. Yum! Cheers. RobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-87216434333225835942014-06-25T14:48:01.526+12:002014-06-25T14:48:01.526+12:00Hi Nina and Rosie
Awesome story. Did I get eaten b...Hi Nina and Rosie<br />Awesome story. Did I get eaten by the zombies?<br /><br />From Sarah McAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-36792029122167361372014-06-25T14:39:12.977+12:002014-06-25T14:39:12.977+12:00How long was that video
Comment from Phillip How long was that video<br /><br />Comment from Phillip Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-30471646579605806272014-06-25T14:38:51.573+12:002014-06-25T14:38:51.573+12:00Hi hokey pokey team
I like how you put the clappin...Hi hokey pokey team<br />I like how you put the clapping on the end. Next time you could show the kids eating the hokey pokey. What did the bigger hokey pokey taste like?<br /><br />From Sarah mcAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-40978879883057973692014-06-25T14:29:31.436+12:002014-06-25T14:29:31.436+12:00tuala; next time you could talk louder.
http://spr...tuala; next time you could talk louder.<br />http://springstonteamendeavour.blogspot.co.nz/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-66296187283232561492014-06-24T16:21:44.212+12:002014-06-24T16:21:44.212+12:00This was a really interesting experiment, and I wa...This was a really interesting experiment, and I watched it the whole way through!<br /><br />I would like to know what the hokey pokey looked like when you cut it in half - could you see lots more bubbles in the second lot of hokey pokey? <br /><br />I'd also love to know how the hokey pokey tasted with the extra baking soda in it - did it taste the same? My hypothesis is that it would be 'yuck'!<br /><br />CarolMadmacnzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06517777960953636034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-71740689429060827692014-06-21T20:29:13.177+12:002014-06-21T20:29:13.177+12:00Rosie, you log into our blog using the class e-mai...Rosie, you log into our blog using the class e-mail then our password. Look on the 'posts' till you find yours and select 'edit'. I'll show you how on Monday. :)Allana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-15514750552787624292014-06-21T19:10:51.030+12:002014-06-21T19:10:51.030+12:00Hi Elizabeth
I like your photo.My Dad didn't ...Hi Elizabeth <br />I like your photo.My Dad didn't have his glasses on so he thought at first you were drinking out of a gumboot but you were kissing a horse. Thanks for your nice comments.<br />From RosieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-91585256378919995082014-06-20T07:09:15.448+12:002014-06-20T07:09:15.448+12:00Hello Aria
Well done for your 5SC entry! I liked ...Hello Aria<br />Well done for your 5SC entry! I liked how you described the bunting as looking like dinosaur teeth. I've never thought of that before but now you've mentioned it, I can see that it does!<br />Mrs Ower (Team 5SC)<br />Costa del Sol, Spain<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-12310506563187984832014-06-19T16:13:24.997+12:002014-06-19T16:13:24.997+12:00Hello,
I am a student studying to be a teacher and...Hello,<br />I am a student studying to be a teacher and we are learning about kids blogs. So we had to look at a few and I came to yours. Wow what emotion you showed in your writing! Great job describing everything I felt like I was loosing a puppy. Nice work.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11299184131808777865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-20168634904684234942014-06-18T14:47:15.954+12:002014-06-18T14:47:15.954+12:00sammy did you grind the pan in half
Sam Gsammy did you grind the pan in half <br /><br />Sam GAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com