tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post238778242590743874..comments2023-03-25T23:13:13.610+13:00Comments on Springston Waka Endeavour: Before SunriseUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-14028956084320219102013-04-18T09:32:33.141+12:002013-04-18T09:32:33.141+12:00To Lorraine,
Thanks for the comment Estee will be ...To Lorraine,<br />Thanks for the comment Estee will be happy about the great comment you wrote.<br />From Lucy and ChloeLucy and Chloenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-40707551955739117572013-04-12T17:42:23.091+12:002013-04-12T17:42:23.091+12:00Well done Estee, what a fantastic story.
You used...Well done Estee, what a fantastic story. <br />You used some great descriptive words.Lorrainenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-36678683544729158672013-04-12T14:33:56.004+12:002013-04-12T14:33:56.004+12:00I am so proud of my self i love all i think i shou...I am so proud of my self i love all i think i should work on putting more words in to it ESTEEesteenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7097017478484712415.post-58965754784522888772013-04-11T20:49:52.411+12:002013-04-11T20:49:52.411+12:00Estee, you have done a really good job of describi...Estee, you have done a really good job of describing the Shadow. I know how he looks and what he is feeling. I also love the way you have described the candle as well:<br />She looked alive and turned with a shy rosy blush. Her eyes twinkled like golden stars in the moonlight.<br /><br />To make this story even better, you might want to try changing the words so they all say it happened in the past.<br />His eyes glowed, he moved slowly and his lips didn't say much.Allana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.com