Monday 16 June 2014

5 Sentence Challenge #17 - Arohaina

The Market

Tall buildings gather around the market. They have window eyes watching and bunting dancing for joy in the breeze.
The sound of happy chatter surrounds me as the bells chime from the church tower.
Teasing arms surround me and my mouth waters as I smell sharp cheese hot bacon butties cooking.
I'd like to eat one!


From Arohaina 

1 comment:

  1. Great work Arohaina on getting your market description finished and onto the class blog. I like the way you have talked about the buildings as if they are alive. This is called 'personification' as you have made them sound like a person: Tall buildings gather around the market. They have window eyes watching and bunting dancing for joy in the breeze.
    It is also great that you have used personification again to describe what the bunting is doing: bunting dancing for joy in the breeze.

    Challenge:
    What do you mean by teasing arms?
    Teasing arms surround me and my mouth waters as I smell sharp cheese hot bacon butties cooking.

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